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When I was a child, my teachers and parents said to me, 'people who have no dreams of the future will not fly far away'. Because of those inspiring words from my parents and teachers, I tried to make inspired by to be a chef. I am studying the simple cooks first and next started a complex type of cooking. I can improve my cooking skill by just trying to start cooking something small like fried rice ect. I want to study how to cook properly and hygiene management and try to apply it. In the future I want to be a famous chef as I can cook many delicious dishes for my family and my friends and they are very happy to eat my cooking. On the other hand, I would like to be a computer expert that can fix and repair computers like an expert. Also I would like to open up a computer service shop in the future. I like my dreams because now days technologies are getting tougher and later on only some people that can fix computer technologies in the future. That's why I try to catch up to study the technologies now days so in the future I might help people who is in need of a computer expert. I will also try to stay on my studies now so I can still graduate on high school. I still don't know which one I should choose to my future but I choose to be an computer expert still cause I like to break things up to see what's in it cause I'm always curious what drives that thing to make it work for example the programs for a laptop. Sometimes when I open up a electronic , I can't reassemble them again hahaha..... so I studied first from my cousin who opened up a computer shop in bogor. Sometimes I followed him to the shop so I can see what is in the computers disk are like , and I also like to help him to repair a CPU cause I'm curious remember. I try to fix it with my cousin watching my every step I'm doing , if I do something wrong he will ask me to stop and he will explain to me how to do it. I will try my best to do my dream job in the future, and if I fail or I have problems with my studies, I will keep on dreaming to overcome the problem and keep believing I will have a good life in the future.
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My dream to be a chef
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My Dream To Be A Chef

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              When I was a child, my teachers and parents said to me, 'people who have no dreams of the future will not fly far away'. Because of those inspiring words from my parents and teachers, I tried to make inspired by to be a chef.
             
             
              I am studying the simple cooks first and next started a complex type of cooking. I can improve my cooking skill by just trying to start cooking something small like fried rice ect. I want to study how to cook properly and hygiene management and try to apply it.
             
              In the future I want to be a famous chef as I can cook many delicious dishes for my family and my friends and they are very happy to eat my cooking. On the other hand, I would like to be a computer expert that can fix and repair computers like an expert. Also I would like to open up a computer service shop in the future. I like my dreams because now days technologies are getting tougher and later on only some people that can fix computer technologies in the future. That's why I try to catch up to study the technologies now days so in the future I might help people who is in need of a computer expert. I will also try to stay on my studies now so I can still graduate on high school. I still don't know which one I should choose to my future but I choose to be an computer expert still cause I like to break things up to see what's in it cause I'm always curious what drives that thing to make it work for example the programs for a laptop. Sometimes when I open up a electronic , I can't reassemble them again hahaha. . . . . so I studied first from my cousin who opened up a computer shop in bogor. Sometimes I followed him to the shop so I can see what is in the computers disk are like , and I also like to help him to repair a CPU cause I'm curious remember. I try to fix it with my cousin watching my every step I'm doing , if I do something wrong he will ask me to stop and he will explain to me how to do it.
             
              I will try my best to do my dream job in the future, and if I fail or I have problems with my studies, I will keep on dreaming to overcome the problem and keep believing I will have a good life in the future.
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