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On a corner of the world, there was a small village. The villagers that lived there were poor, hardworking and they earned each thing they wanted in harsh work. The villagers worked fourteen hours a day without rest. The living conditions in the village were not good. In the village, there was a family named Brown. The Brown has a new-born child today. The child, called Steven, was said to be born to change their family environment. This child worked very hard; he wanted to be airplane pilot, a dream that his parents wanted to be true. When he was very young, he had different kinds of airplanes model around the world. He worked very hard to make his dream come true. In the village, day and night, airplanes flying mostly are for transportation. "I am very interested in airplane; so I worked very hard each day." Said Steven. He dreamed to be a pilot because he played around in the village every day, he wondered what was that on the sky, a flying metallic object, he asked his parents, his parents said that those were called airplanes. His feel that looking down the city would feel better than looking up in the sky. Steven cried to himself, "From now since, his dream is to become a pilot and make his family happy." As Steven grows older, he began to try hard, and wanted to learn more knowledge. Every day he is happy to go to school. He wanted to learn more and became a pilot. He knows that if he learned more the chances of him getting to be a pilot would be true. His family supported him very much and they worked together each day. Steven tries hard every day in school, and he was happy until one day his friend, Alex, told him "You would never be a pilot because the people who born in this village would end up working hard at all time and no one has become a pilot in the village." But the teacher in the school supported him, the teacher knew that Steven was a kid that worked hard and people who worked hard usually get what they want. For Steven, he worked hard in school, but Steven's family had economy problems, the teacher in his class told him, "I would even pay part of my money for you to go to school." The teacher declared, "Steven worked very hard, he learned a lot about airplanes, he reacted fast in class, and answered all the questions correctly every time I asked." At the end, it was finally the day of graduating, Steven had successfully graduated, his teacher told him "There is a college called Harvard downtown that offers a scholar ship and you could continue to learn more and to purse your dream." He successfully went into the college. He was happy. Each student and the teachers were surprised to see a kid that was so smart and had known everything. He was happy that he made into the college. This college is all about being a pilot; his dream is half true now. In classes his grade was the best out of the sixty-five classmates. Every day he gets to simulate the airplane model, he was smart and know every step very well. In his class he met a girl named Tiffany, she was cute and nice, but she was not happy in this school. She screamed, "I am forced to by my parents." Everything was about being a pilot and she was not interested at all. They were together, they were in relationship. Steven worked hard each day in the school because of the environment and the dream. Tiffany slacked every day and had nothing to do each day. One day Steven asked, "Tiffany why you don't seem to be interested?" Then Steven took Tiffany to the cliff. "Imagine looking down and seeing the city from above." "What was it like?" "How does it feel?" Tiffany was influenced by Steven and Tiffany had starting to like the class and she worked hard with Steven in each day in school. One day, they went out on a date. Steven was riding the motorcycle; Tiffany was sitting at the back. They were all very happy. But at a moment, a car with a drunk driver, came fast toward them and hit them. They were at last in the hospital, Steven was in a Coma for 10 days, and Tiffany was still in surgery. Finally at day 15, Steven had woken up, he found out the surgery for Tiffany was not successful. Tiffany was dead, and Steven was sad. Steven noticed that one of his eyes was blind. At the first, he thought that it could recover. After three months his eyes still did not recover, he finally accepted the truth, and he was very sad because his girlfriend was dead, and mostly his dream was broken into half. He was sad and Steven was very angry. "God, why you treat me like this." "I must be the unluckiest person." After he went out of the hospital he went to the cliff. The cliff had much memory and was also the start of the dream. Everything was started from the cliff. He was sad. He wants to end his life because everything has been gone. His dream and his girlfriend. The wanted to jump right off the cliff. When he wanted to end his life, he saw the image of his girlfriend. Tiffany stated, "I want you to live on, if you do love me." "You have change my life from the first place." Then, Tiffany disappeared. At the moment, he heard a person calling his name. "Steven!, Steven!, where are you?" It was everyone who cares about him that scared that he might kill himself. He continues living his life. He had to go back to the hospital each week and change his medicine. During this time, the nurse, Monica, was especially nice to him. He felt that she looked like Tiffany, he put the love he had to her. Their relationship got better and better each time they've meet each other. One day, a doctor told Steven, "Now there is a new technology will could recover your eyesight." Steven accepted it and the surgery was successful. When he opened his eyes his eyes he saw the whole new world and everything was bright as usually, but this time it got brighter and clearer. He was very happy, he told Monica that he can see. Monica was lying on the bed, and her eye was cover with gauze. He suddenly realized that there was no new technology and Monica gave her eye to the Steven. Steven asked the Monica why did you give your eye to me? Monica whispered, "I also had a dream and I know the feeling of a dream breaking apart, so I knows the feeling." So she decided to give the eye to Steven to proceed and continue with his dream. Steven kept up his training back to his school. He was a diligent student and the day he got graduated is also the day he passed the pilot license. Each time he drove the plane he thought of Monica and few years later, he earned a lot of money he bought a plane of his own. He thought about the days before, Tiffany and his dreams, to drive the plane around the world, and then he went to ask Monica and invited Monica to be his first passenger. They took off and watch the sunset, and suddenly the bright sun light shine on her face and Steven feels like it is like Tiffany. Steven suddenly mumbled, "Tiffany I miss you so much." Monica added, "Tiffany is my sister, and I already know what had happen and what had happen to my sister, but you don't know that the I am Tiffany's sister." Steven asked her "would you like to spend your rest life with me? Monica replied and smiled with tears in her eyes.
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Flying Without Wings Essay

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              On a corner of the world, there was a small village. The villagers that lived there were poor, hardworking and they earned each thing they wanted in harsh work. The villagers worked fourteen hours a day without rest. The living conditions in the village were not good.
             
             
              In the village, there was a family named Brown. The Brown has a new-born child today. The child, called Steven, was said to be born to change their family environment. This child worked very hard; he wanted to be airplane pilot, a dream that his parents wanted to be true. When he was very young, he had different kinds of airplanes model around the world. He worked very hard to make his dream come true. In the village, day and night, airplanes flying mostly are for transportation.
             
              "I am very interested in airplane; so I worked very hard each day. " Said Steven.
             
              He dreamed to be a pilot because he played around in the village every day, he wondered what was that on the sky, a flying metallic object, he asked his parents, his parents said that those were called airplanes. His feel that looking down the city would feel better than looking up in the sky. Steven cried to himself, "From now since, his dream is to become a pilot and make his family happy. "
             
              As Steven grows older, he began to try hard, and wanted to learn more knowledge. Every day he is happy to go to school. He wanted to learn more and became a pilot. He knows that if he learned more the chances of him getting to be a pilot would be true. His family supported him very much and they worked together each day. Steven tries hard every day in school, and he was happy until one day his friend, Alex, told him "You would never be a pilot because the people who born in this village would end up working hard at all time and no one has become a pilot in the village. "
             
              But the teacher in the school supported him, the teacher knew that Steven was a kid that worked hard and people who worked hard usually get what they want. For Steven, he worked hard in school, but Steven's family had economy problems, the teacher in his class told him, "I would even pay part of my money for you to go to school. " The teacher declared, "Steven worked very hard, he learned a lot about airplanes, he reacted fast in class, and answered all the questions correctly every time I asked. " At the end, it was finally the day of graduating, Steven had successfully graduated, his teacher told him "There is a college called Harvard downtown that offers a scholar ship and you could continue to learn more and to purse your dream. "
             
              He successfully went into the college. He was happy. Each student and the teachers were surprised to see a kid that was so smart and had known everything. He was happy that he made into the college. This college is all about being a pilot; his dream is half true now. In classes his grade was the best out of the sixty-five classmates. Every day he gets to simulate the airplane model, he was smart and know every step very well. In his class he met a girl named Tiffany, she was cute and nice, but she was not happy in this school. She screamed, "I am forced to by my parents. " Everything was about being a pilot and she was not interested at all. They were together, they were in relationship. Steven worked hard each day in the school because of the environment and the dream. Tiffany slacked every day and had nothing to do each day. One day Steven asked, "Tiffany why you don't seem to be interested? " Then Steven took Tiffany to the cliff.
             
              "Imagine looking down and seeing the city from above. " "What was it like? "
             
              "How does it feel? "
             
              Tiffany was influenced by Steven and Tiffany had starting to like the class and she worked hard with Steven in each day in school. One day, they went out on a date. Steven was riding the motorcycle; Tiffany was sitting at the back. They were all very happy. But at a moment, a car with a drunk driver, came fast toward them and hit them. They were at last in the hospital, Steven was in a Coma for 10 days, and Tiffany was still in surgery. Finally at day 15, Steven had woken up, he found out the surgery for Tiffany was not successful. Tiffany was dead, and Steven was sad. Steven noticed that one of his eyes was blind. At the first, he thought that it could recover. After three months his eyes still did not recover, he finally accepted the truth, and he was very sad because his girlfriend was dead, and mostly his dream was broken into half. He was sad and Steven was very angry.
             
              "God, why you treat me like this. "
             
              "I must be the unluckiest person. "
             
              After he went out of the hospital he went to the cliff. The cliff had much memory and was also the start of the dream. Everything was started from the cliff. He was sad. He wants to end his life because everything has been gone. His dream and his girlfriend. The wanted to jump right off the cliff. When he wanted to end his life, he saw the image of his girlfriend. Tiffany stated, "I want you to live on, if you do love me. " "You have change my life from the first place. " Then, Tiffany disappeared.
             
              At the moment, he heard a person calling his name. "Steven! , Steven! , where are you? " It was everyone who cares about him that scared that he might kill himself. He continues living his life. He had to go back to the hospital each week and change his medicine. During this time, the nurse, Monica, was especially nice to him. He felt that she looked like Tiffany, he put the love he had to her. Their relationship got better and better each time they've meet each other. One day, a doctor told Steven, "Now there is a new technology will could recover your eyesight. " Steven accepted it and the surgery was successful. When he opened his eyes his eyes he saw the whole new world and everything was bright as usually, but this time it got brighter and clearer. He was very happy, he told Monica that he can see. Monica was lying on the bed, and her eye was cover with gauze. He suddenly realized that there was no new technology and Monica gave her eye to the Steven. Steven asked the Monica why did you give your eye to me? Monica whispered, "I also had a dream and I know the feeling of a dream breaking apart, so I knows the feeling. " So she decided to give the eye to Steven to proceed and continue with his dream.
             
              Steven kept up his training back to his school. He was a diligent student and the day he got graduated is also the day he passed the pilot license. Each time he drove the plane he thought of Monica and few years later, he earned a lot of money he bought a plane of his own. He thought about the days before, Tiffany and his dreams, to drive the plane around the world, and then he went to ask Monica and invited Monica to be his first passenger. They took off and watch the sunset, and suddenly the bright sun light shine on her face and Steven feels like it is like Tiffany. Steven suddenly mumbled, "Tiffany I miss you so much. " Monica added, "Tiffany is my sister, and I already know what had happen and what had happen to my sister, but you don't know that the I am Tiffany's sister. " Steven asked her "would you like to spend your rest life with me? Monica replied and smiled with tears in her eyes.
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