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Sometimes the beach is as hot as the microwave just turned off after heating a big, red, spicy sauce. The beach is as quiet as the library with people doing exams. The sun will smile at them if they smile at it. Maybe animals, such as crabs, dolphins or seagull's may start talking with him as his best friends talking very constantly about his best sport. The, enclosed, beach is silent. The bright ball blinds you as it emerges; it rises like a yellow lollipop on the distant horizon. Crashing against the shore, small waves wash the night's debris onto the land. The untouched golden sand covers the floor as far as your eyes can see. Soothing, a gentle sea breeze rustles through your hair. ??Beach shops prepare for their day of excited costumers bustling in and out of their small seafront shops. Opening their doors, they bring out all of there beach products looking out to the sea you can see the large cruise ships on the worlds edge. Abandoned, nothing there apart from a few sea gulls pecking at the rubbish left by yesterday's visitors. Empty crisp wrappers, chocolate wrappers, ice cream papers and half eaten cones scatter the yellow sand. Young children stumble onto the moist sand, with small buckets and spades in their hands, they shout and talk in excitement. Damp sand is forced between their toes. Straight away, the young children put on their swimming costumes and are smothered with thick white sunscreen, to protect them from the heavy radiation. The beach's waves are of many colors, sizes and sounds that make noises like a ''crash'' noise. The colors of the waves of the beach are like a colorful rainbow just coming out from the mountain of happiness. The colors of the waves are special. Red is when candy will in an instant spread throughout the whole big yellow beach. Blue is when big, fat and amazing blue whales, blue dolphins and blue fishes will come from there and start to tell a wonderful story to every child that is interesting about being good at swimming. The beach is as wet as a watermelon just cut by the most famous chef in the whole universe. It is very comfortable to stay and join with the funny creatures, they will teach you about the new jokes and new tricks they could use to make magic, the magic is as powerful as the magic of the best wizard of all times. After the big party at sunlight, the sun goes down as fast as the cheetah running to get the most delicious food ever made. Then the moon will come out and start to open his eyes, with a very bright blue color and a very bright teeth as is seeing the whitest color of the universe. The moon starts to say to everyone that wants to help so that the moon goes so fast as the Apollo rocket to the sky to have a very good and special night and try to sign up for the amazing trip to the mountain of happiness. The enclosed beach has no noise. The sun is blinding as it emerges; it rises like a yellow balloon on the distant horizon. As the sun gradually starts to appear, a new day unfolds. As the gentle waves lap against the shore, a shoal of crowded fish dart to and frown. Seagulls swoop down from the sky determined to catch their unsuspecting prey. The never ending golden sand stretches out as far as you can see, waiting patiently for people to leave their mark. The silent echo of the lifeless sea is startling as the day begins; it was almost as if it had sucked out the souls of the nearby creatures. The relaxing atmosphere slowly starts to ease the mind; a gentle sea breeze rustle through the leaves of nearby palm trees waking small birds from their slumber. The beach is abandoned, nothing there apart from a few seagulls pecking at yesterdays leftovers, excited about what today might bring.
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A Descriptive Essay About The Beach

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              Sometimes the beach is as hot as the microwave just turned off after heating a big, red, spicy sauce. The beach is as quiet as the library with people doing exams. The sun will smile at them if they smile at it. Maybe animals, such as crabs, dolphins or seagull's may start talking with him as his best friends talking very constantly about his best sport.
             
             
              The, enclosed, beach is silent. The bright ball blinds you as it emerges; it rises like a yellow lollipop on the distant horizon. Crashing against the shore, small waves wash the night's debris onto the land. The untouched golden sand covers the floor as far as your eyes can see. Soothing, a gentle sea breeze rustles through your hair. ? ? Beach shops prepare for their day of excited costumers bustling in and out of their small seafront shops. Opening their doors, they bring out all of there beach products looking out to the sea you can see the large cruise ships on the worlds edge. Abandoned, nothing there apart from a few sea gulls pecking at the rubbish left by yesterday's visitors. Empty crisp wrappers, chocolate wrappers, ice cream papers and half eaten cones scatter the yellow sand. Young children stumble onto the moist sand, with small buckets and spades in their hands, they shout and talk in excitement. Damp sand is forced between their toes. Straight away, the young children put on their swimming costumes and are smothered with thick white sunscreen, to protect them from the heavy radiation.
             
              The beach's waves are of many colors, sizes and sounds that make noises like a ''crash'' noise. The colors of the waves of the beach are like a colorful rainbow just coming out from the mountain of happiness. The colors of the waves are special. Red is when candy will in an instant spread throughout the whole big yellow beach. Blue is when big, fat and amazing blue whales, blue dolphins and blue fishes will come from there and start to tell a wonderful story to every child that is interesting about being good at swimming. The beach is as wet as a watermelon just cut by the most famous chef in the whole universe. It is very comfortable to stay and join with the funny creatures, they will teach you about the new jokes and new tricks they could use to make magic, the magic is as powerful as the magic of the best wizard of all times. After the big party at sunlight, the sun goes down as fast as the cheetah running to get the most delicious food ever made. Then the moon will come out and start to open his eyes, with a very bright blue color and a very bright teeth as is seeing the whitest color of the universe. The moon starts to say to everyone that wants to help so that the moon goes so fast as the Apollo rocket to the sky to have a very good and special night and try to sign up for the amazing trip to the mountain of happiness.
             
              The enclosed beach has no noise. The sun is blinding as it emerges; it rises like a yellow balloon on the distant horizon. As the sun gradually starts to appear, a new day unfolds. As the gentle waves lap against the shore, a shoal of crowded fish dart to and frown. Seagulls swoop down from the sky determined to catch their unsuspecting prey. The never ending golden sand stretches out as far as you can see, waiting patiently for people to leave their mark. The silent echo of the lifeless sea is startling as the day begins; it was almost as if it had sucked out the souls of the nearby creatures. The relaxing atmosphere slowly starts to ease the mind; a gentle sea breeze rustle through the leaves of nearby palm trees waking small birds from their slumber. The beach is abandoned, nothing there apart from a few seagulls pecking at yesterdays leftovers, excited about what today might bring.
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